half empty half full

half empty half full

A Poem by keith
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a glass that holds

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half empty half full



half empty half full

the glass 
half empty 
half full
matters not
it is 
a glass 
that holds

© 2022 keith


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Who knew a glass could give such a vivid visual thru the written word...very good...

Posted 2 Years Ago


keith

2 Years Ago

there is much beauty thru simple words
thanks for stopping in and sharing your thoughts
It's said the optimist will claim it's half full, while the pessimist will swear it's half empty.
I always thought the glass was just too tall. 🤔

But, if it holds something, as it was designed to, it's serving the purpose for which it was created, and that's more than can be said of so many of us humans, who are basically less than fully useful.

Anyway, Keith, ya got us thinkin', and that's a start! ⁓ Richard🖌

Posted 2 Years Ago


keith

2 Years Ago

isn't that the purpose of writing? to give the reader a pause to reflect?
when we do that we .. read more
This is powerful. Wow, never did I think about a glass like that! Yes, a glass with water can be half full or half empty depending on the person's perception. But all that aside, a glasses main function is to hold the liquid. Short yet powerful, I loved it!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


keith

2 Years Ago

thank ya too much!
i'll be here all week!
remember to tip your hard working waitresses.. read more
Aura

2 Years Ago

Ah yes! The people who make sure the glass completes it's function :) will do!
I like the old wisdom of half-empty and half-filled. Each decision we make. Can be wrong or right? Thank you Keith for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


keith

2 Years Ago

appreciate the visit and comment
we are the captains of our ships
we make the decision.. read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

I agree Keith.
“it is
a glass
that holds”
Very profound take on this Keith. Concise and powerful. Yes, respect the glass, no matter what. Boom- drop mike. Kudos on a great write

Posted 2 Years Ago


keith

2 Years Ago

Boom- drop mike. HA! BEST REVIEW EVER!
ain't nobody got anything on you! ... NOBODY1
Annette Pisano-Higley

2 Years Ago

:))))))))))))) Big smile here- thanks my friend!

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