how much more crystal clear can i be

backstabbers, fuk off !!

how much more crystal clear can i be

how much more crystal clear can i be

 

i'm a young star, and i'm gonna win it

bet on your lucky stud, coz i'm gonna bring it

dont care for no more broken bones

i'm ready to beat ya wid dem sticks and stones

get you out of your mobil home

will teach you never eva do me wrong

ya m**********r,

please please please

gimme a reason, jus enough for me to squeeze

slice you open, cut you clean

have no mercy, no place to plead 

you pushed me down when i was feeling weak

now m**********r

i'm back with a vengengance, ready to begin this

kick your a*s, and make your face horroundous

keep your s**t together is all i needed to hear

now the burning man has no fear

coming coming coming at you fast and strong

now maybe you can stop sayinjg me wrong

corner me and question me like a child

throw a fit, loose control, go insane and wild

but no no no, no more of that please

i'm gonna break both of ya knees

have you begiing for mercy, please !

you gonna pay for all your evil deeds

you exchanged my love , for your filthy greed

ya m**********r,

i've gone crazy and i've gone dumb

all this pain has made me numb

feel no joy when i hit your face

no more energy to cut down the chase

you pricked me bad, and i'm still bleeding

my heart's full of hate, its stop needing

gonna gonna gonna have to kick your a*s

aint no other way for you to last

you better know i'm young and fast

lie in peace, when i close the coffin cast

run run run, where i cant see

go save yourself, go climb a tree

my rage i put in these lines for you to read

last warning, try and save yourself from me

how much more crystlal clear can i be

how much more crystal clear can i be

 

- " lord, never let this wound on my back heal, i first want to bleed to death and then come back to life. "

 

Author's Note

please dont mind the explicit language, couldnt control myself.
the tempo of the verse is a bit fast, trying reading it,
dhum dhum dhum....dhumdhudum dhumdhudum dhum...

Reviews

[Call Me Cash]

I can tell you were a bit on the upset side when you wrote this and that works.
Poetry should be about emotion and thought, now what sounds 'pretty'.
Apart from the many SPAG errors. I love it, it does need a bit of polishing, but don't change the context.
Good work here...really well done! :)