The End

The End

A Poem by SaRuGi

Like a million abstracts, 
Sticking in my mind. 
You're the one that lingers, 
lingers for the end. 

Like a thousand wishes,
Clasping in my heart. 
You're the one that came true , 
Came true till the end. 

Like a hundred words, 
remaining in my hand.
You're the one that stays,
stays in the end. 

Like a ton of feelings,
mixing me emotion. 
You're the one that is pure, 
As pure as my love to you. 

© 2012 SaRuGi


Author's Note

SaRuGi
Please tell me what i can do to make it better. Thank You. Any suggestions would be appreciated. :)

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It's good. The flow could do with a little tampering, it seems a bit jittery and the words don't reciprocate that. Other than that nice job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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SaRuGi

12 Years Ago

thank you! i'll keep that in mind the next time :)

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SaRuGi
SaRuGi

Suzhou, Jiangsu, China



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