The creature

The creature

A Poem by SaRuGi

I am not a fortune teller, 

I cannot look into the future. 

But I know that you are not the feller. 

I am in love with a beautiful creature. 

 

A creature with such amazing features. 

Ones that drown you closer. 

A creature with such amazing features. 

A creature that is a poseur. 



Yet I keep falling deeper, 

Maybe it is his cold hands and warm heart. 

He may be my keeper, 

Without him I will fall apart. 



I am not a fortune teller,

But i want a future with the creature. 

He is the caller,

The one that calls my name in the adventure. 



Adventure of love. 

 

 

© 2012 SaRuGi


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I think its Great! I especially love the way you've ended the poem, it kinda makes it whole! Well, love has no limits, and I can feel that through your poem, so nicely done! And well, i like the descriptions as well! NIce written!

Posted 12 Years Ago


SaRuGi

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :)
Cynthia Man

12 Years Ago

ur welcome :)

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SaRuGi
SaRuGi

Suzhou, Jiangsu, China



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