Star-Crossed

Star-Crossed

A Poem by SaRuGi

Once I was wishing on a star,

Because I thought we were star-crossed.

But I guess I was wrong,

And you were just fooling me all along.

 

We once were star-crossed,

But we are just an unfinished embossment.

That was never started in a way it was supposed to be,

A love that was not meant to be.

 

That love was just a dream,

A dream that never came true.

Now like the morning dew,

It is gone.

 

Hoping that in my next love,

I will find my star-crossed.

The one that was meant to be,

And not repeating history.

© 2012 SaRuGi


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So romantic Sarugi...

Posted 12 Years Ago


SaRuGi

12 Years Ago

:D thank you! :D
I love the first two lines of the poem especially.

"Once I was wishing on a star,
Because I thought we were star-crossed."

Are not we all "forbidden lovers in the stars"... GREAT WRITE

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SaRuGi

12 Years Ago

Thank you~~ ;D im going to try and change the rest sometime soon.... :P

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SaRuGi
SaRuGi

Suzhou, Jiangsu, China



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