Passion Within

Passion within
Seeping through skin.
A single glare
A lustful stare.
A kiss so deep
A skipped heartbeat.
A body caressed
A soul undressed.
A raging desire
Bodies on fire.
Sweetness is filled
Now gasping and thrilled.
Passion turned to ecstasy
For two lovers now see.
Blushing with sin
For that Passion within.

Reviews

[gavinmichaels]

I love the way you are able to capture raw sensuality with your words and paint a beautiful picture

[Angie G]

I wish I could be more eloquent with my words.. but what I write comes from within my dorky world.. lol ty Gavin

[gavinmichaels]

You are eloquent sweetie never doubt that. You can make the mundane seem beautiful

[Chris]

Thinking of dancing eves... the sights and sounds as people weave together to form heat incarnate. A good feeling in that.

[A. Amos]

Passionate and sensual read, pure magic you created here my friend

[Angie G]

Tyvm Amos.. as always humbled by your words.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear friend

[Angie G]

Its always a great thrill to write for all you whom I so admire. Thank you for your kind words and for feeling my work!!

[kublakhan27]

Very cool piece...I like the idea of the body being caressed while the soul is undressed...I like the flow and the rhymes as well, it kind of reflects the slow-burning progression of the actions you're laid out here...nicely done :)

[Angie G]

Ty for your kind review.. much appreciated!!

[Sami Khalil]

Gasping after reading this thrilling write...Splendid...:)..........

[Angie G]

Tyvm Sami!! Always a pleasure to thrill the readers!! Lol

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......................

[wordman]

this is a very passionate write loved it

[Angie G]

Ty Wordman!! Do it with passion or not at all right??!!

[wordman]

my motto if you can`t feel it don`t write it

[Angie G]

So very true.. some say actions speak louder than words, but for me, words said with passion will always be remembered.

[wordman]

words and music makes the world go round

[Frieda P]

Woo I read this without coming up for a breath, it floats from beginning to end...nice rhythm going, like lovers....

A soul undressed.
A raging desire
Bodies on fire.

Oh Yeah... ;-)

[Angie G]

Ty Miss Frieda.. always a pleasure to read your comments!!

[Frieda P]

The pleasure was all mine Angie! :-)