Flirting

You see it as you wish.

I'm filled with passion deep within,
Blooming and seeping through my skin.

To tease and tempt in every way,
Your curiosity wanting everyday.

My words softly whispered in your ear,
Making you shiver the more you hear.

I will tell you of tales filled with lust,
Your want and need will be a must.

I will flirt with your growing desires,
Making your body fill with burning fires.

Then I will ravish you till you go wild,
Leaving you panting and fully riled!

Don't worry I will set your mind free,
For tomorrow I will give you more of my Poetry.

Reviews

[Ashwin Shanker]

"Your curiosity wanting everyday.'

I felt the above line a lil forced, otherwise I really loved the poem. It's very sensuous and creative; nodding people in one direction, but catching them off-gaurd with the climax. And YES, I will wait for more of your poetry

[Angie G]

I really appreciate your kind review.. Thank you for reading my crazy work. Happy writing!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Dear Angie,

Incredible poem! it was captivating and creative!
My favorite part would have to be, "My words softly whispered in your ear,
Making you shiver the more you hear." The words flowed perfectly!
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry!

Sincerely,

C. Lee Battaglia

[Angie G]

I'm humbled by your kind review. Thank you Lee. Happy writing!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

You're welcome!

[Dj]

Indeed i would think that everyone including myself will want more. Beautiful as always

[Angie G]

As always you are too kind. Thank you for taking the time to read my work.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Whoa! I'm insane for leaving this erotic write but life goes on.

Regards,
Al

[Angie G]

Lol thank you Alfred.. Happy writing!

[KCthelastboyscout]

Reading this warmed up all the blood in my body.I always enjoy your way with words.wonderful.

[Angie G]

Always glad to warm up the reader KC!! Thank you. Happy writing!

[Shaquana Adams]

I love the word flow here. Nicely done :)
-QuanaWana

[gavinmichaels]

As usual Angie you know how to captivate us and make us smile. I really enjoyed this piece

[Chris]

You had fun and people smiled... that is what it is.

[lovejulez03]

That was definitely entertaining and well written :) the end made me smile. Like a surprise. Thanks for sharing!

[wordman]

damn girl my head in a spin

[Angie G]

Lol thank you Wordman... Always a pleasure knowing u like my weird work lol

[Angie G]

Always a pleasure Mr.Amos.. Thank you!!!