Flirting

You see it as you wish.

I'm filled with passion deep within,
Blooming and seeping through my skin.

To tease and tempt in every way,
Your curiosity wanting everyday.

My words softly whispered in your ear,
Making you shiver the more you hear.

I will tell you of tales filled with lust,
Your want and need will be a must.

I will flirt with your growing desires,
Making your body fill with burning fires.

Then I will ravish you till you go wild,
Leaving you panting and fully riled!

Don't worry I will set your mind free,
For tomorrow I will give you more of my Poetry.

Reviews

[Ashwin Shanker]

"Your curiosity wanting everyday.'

I felt the above line a lil forced, otherwise I really loved the poem. It's very sensuous and creative; nodding people in one direction, but catching them off-gaurd with the climax. And YES, I will wait for more of your poetry

[Angie G]

I really appreciate your kind review.. Thank you for reading my crazy work. Happy writing!

[Trouble]

I love this. It's amazing and easy-going, not hard to read. I enjoyed it, the breeziness of it is something I liked the most.

[barleygirl]

Good job of painting a word picture that delivers all the physical senses, as one experiences such a flirtation. Your rhymes work well & your message is a nice balance of sensory & sensual, with a perfect hint of seduction. Fondly, Margie

[Angie G]

Always an honor when you stop by and read my work. Happy writing my friend.

[Mirror]

Ah! "To tease and tempt in every way,
Your curiosity wanting everyday. " Almost everyone have this hidden character.

[Angie G]

Thank you dear!!

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

This is really amazing. Love rhyme. Well structured, Broken Soul

[Angie G]

Truly appreciate your kind comment. Happy writing!!

[conversations with her ..]

this is beautifully written, i really enjoyed this poem!

you're inspiring and I'm new on here, so id love it if you were to review one of my poems. xo

[Angie G]

I appreciate your review and I will gladly read your work sweetie.. Happy writing!!

[MAC]

love it!!! clever and truly well crafted...

[Angie G]

I'm humbled by your kind words.. Hope u enjoy my crazy work.. Happy writing!

[Misterr Remeat]

Very nice writing! I had to read it twice! My stupid cheesy monitor made one line look like "Making your body fill with burning tires. " and I'm like ....wait .......what? I enjoyed it even more the second time around! Well Done!

[Angie G]

Lol I read it again myself just now.. Made sure it wasn't tires!! Lol Thank you for your kind review. Happy writing!!

[Pete]

clever & effective as you lead us on. quite an unexpected ending. perhaps we have dirty minds. you have a twisted sense of humor - i love it.

[Angie G]

Thank you Pete.. Twisted isn't so bad... :) Happy writing!!

[Pete]

welcome. Lol. not in this world ...