Dont open your eyes

Love me with your eyes closed.
With your hands my face trace,
searching for my eyes
then down to finding my lips.
In that moment please give me a kiss.
Your soft lips will trace a line down to my neck,
sending sweet shivers as you hungrily nibble.
Wrap your arms around me bringing our bodies close,
feeling as our heat has suddenly arose.
Don't open your eyes.
For my body you will know with only your hands.
Take in a breath learning my sweet smell.
Touch me in places you thought you knew well.
Learn every nook and every new curve.
Take me slowly and explore me within.
Your hands learning me inside and out.
Dont open your eyes when I release a soft moan,
for my ecstacy you will now have known.

And in the end, with your eyes still closed you'll see,
That this is how true love is meant to be.

Reviews

[A. Amos]

And in the end, with your eyes still closed you'll see,
That this is how true love is meant to be.

Wonderful piece of writing and I'm sure many will relate with your work, especially above verses were amazing and I truly enjoyed the whole read…thanks for sharing

[SAYED THANGAL]

very powerful poem with its touching imagination, closing the eyes, leading to a wonderful celestial world.

[Frieda P]

Woo, stirring read, skirts the edges of erotica and pure unadulterated love...yes I do agree, this is the way to savor another. Love this one, brava!

[Angie G]

Ty for your kind words Kai n Barb... I believe in writing what the heart feels n desires.. best writen poetry has come from souls that need to be heard..

[Kai Rollins]

Passion.

And a lovely portrayal of it. Hot stuff. I like your style, and I'm happy to have read this

[B.J]

Certainly food for thought. I agree with your words. They are heartfelt words

[Angie G]

Thank you Wordman.. Btw, yes, I read all your work lol

[Angie G]

Thank you for your kind words. Love today is so rushed and many just call it Sex. But I trully believe Love should be, smelled, savoured, taken slow, and in the end trully appreciated.

[Justin]

That ending was perfect sounds like somebody's in love :)