Giving up

Nighttime comes too soon,
A light shinning in, maybe the moon.

I try to welcome the darkness,
Only to find a seeking sadness.

A lonely soul that needs peace
Finding it has no release.

A heart that weeps,
While all else sleeps.

Pushing back the memories,
Of yesterday's Love stories.

No comfort for my pain,
Only more tears for my pillow to stain.

Only sleep can cure my fears,
Hoping morning soon appears.

Another day my insecurities fight,
Sure I won't make it through another night.

Hoping to give up with all my might,
Knowing I won't win another fight.

So I will welcome death if it chooses to come,
Hoping the sadness will soon be all gone.

Reviews

[Angie G]

Ty for readiing my work Kai, and look!!^^ I fixed my typo.. I truly appreciate that u noticed it n were not affraid to point it out to me.. thank you!!!

[Kai Rollins]

Just the first line typo my friend (too) but I felt this to be a solid piece that really. Everyone here will find something to take away from this. Great job

[B.J]

Oh! that is so sad but true to life at times. It happens to us all. A beautiful tender write

[Angie G]

Thanks for your words.. :)

[wordman]

and one day true love will come into your life
and all will change a great write but not the way to live
a song called dark moon would blend with the poem