SiLEnCe

The sound of SILENCE

Can anyone hear it

I stay quiet

The only sound I could here was my heart beating

The quiet sounds of my breathing

The rest of the world kept silent

I never thought this silence could be so loud

Can anyone hear it

Reviews

[Marlena]

I like this, but you need to proofread. "Can anyone hear it" should have a question mark at the end, both times. And "here" should be "hear". Otherwise, good work, keep it up :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was a good write. I liked it a lot. Tells a nice story. Thanks for sharing. :)