Turning point

Turning point

A Poem by angelina neves
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Tovli's Ten words: http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Albert%27s-Poetry-Cafe-~-%22Tovli%27s-Ten%22-with-Helena/14711/

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Journal are writing

TV is showing

Hear the bombs exploding

Anger and hunger growing

- Human right’s dies?

Pieces of family ears

Listened in cries

- The planet dries?

Impossible!

When nothing can remain the same

From the chaos

Comes the turning point

And infinite is explained

© 2011 angelina neves


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A breaking down of life before it turns for the better.

Posted 12 Years Ago


it is really a frightening world, we dont really know to where we shall go! great work

Posted 12 Years Ago


I especially like the last line. It provides an interesting counterpoint to the very concrete images above it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very thoughtful and fitting use of the ten words, Angie. Hugs, Sharon

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 3, 2011
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