tummy butterfly

tummy butterfly

A Poem by angelina neves
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Write a poem using the ten (10) words: create, pattern, twirl, window, butterfly, senses, breath. Tea, light, bare - Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ Tovli's Ten words -

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Wrong pattern hurts

Deep down inside out

 

Bare kind of choices

Create step-by-step instructions

Breath in, breath out

Take a cup of tea

 

Open the window of options

Twirl actions wheels

Transform tummy butterfly

In wings to fly

A light to show the way

Senses of relaxing

 

© 2011 angelina neves


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I like what you have done with your 10 words :)........ great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lovely what you have created out of the words . Good write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


an optimistic pom, a nice sun ray in the darkness of night. very nicely simply written. i really enjoyed it so much, keep on the great work

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wonderful poem for the contest. The best use of the "Ten words" certainly flowed off your pen. Thank you for submitting this beauty

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yours sounds like very good advice. Those tummy butterflies are never welcome here, but I certainly lived long enough to have felt the flutters too often. :) Sharon

Posted 13 Years Ago


A sensical and provocatice notion of simplistic notions and turns, well done good read.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 30, 2011
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