Wind up all

http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/ALBERT%27S-POETRY-CAFE-~-%27Keeping-the-Dream-Alive%27-with-Helena/12193/ Incorporating: "I WANDERED LONELY AS A CLOUD" - poem of William Wordsworth

I WANDERED LONELY AS A CLOUD

looking for an axe

to brake the frozen sea

inside me

 

I WANDERED LONELY AS A CLOUD

not looking for a perfect life

not wanting a typical normal life

but a different life wake-up

 

I WANDERED LONELY AS A CLOUD

wishing not o be wound or stab

but dive in the manifesting changes

of something real new

 

I WANDERED LONELY AS A CLOUD

trying hard to translate

the universal language

digest it into simple ideas

 

I WANDERED LONELY AS A CLOUD

Dreaming of making bridges

Sum up inventions

Wind up all

 

Reviews

[Donald Meikle]

Clouds gather and fog in my mind They may be alone but never lonely.

[khalid]

very nice great work but...i have to tell you about some little typing mistakes such as using brake instead of break, o instead of to

[Everett DeValle]

Beautiful work, Angelina, your quill writes brightly.

[imm's place]

an interesting format and very thoughtful pen, it makes the reader think

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Beautiful, Angelina! Great choice of words.

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[Nimbus Thread]

An enjoyable wander Angelina. Trying to understand the world by what and why we mess it up.Building bridges is the best resolution.