Art of Transforming

Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ Poet Craft: Form THE BREF DOUBLE with Salvatore Buttaci!

 

Inside out Life is an Art  

Art of transforming the flow

A way of being in these Earth  

It is the Art of being alive

Try out any theories quiz

Personalize your own chart

You are unique by friction

It is when beautiful thrives

 

When your experiences take part  

Born from the sea, from the sand

The essence of who you are

Models the world in dream worth

 

It is loss and rebirth heart

Cycles of transforming birth

 

 

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

So well written!!

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful, transforming message... life goes on in all its complexity and wonder...

[Belator Books]

I liked the line 'unique by friction'; a textured picture of prose. One small nit of using birth twice in two lines, though I understand the intent.

[Frances O'Neill]

Very nice! The last two lines were very awe-inspiring!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Great! All rules followed and the poem is good.