Chaotic chasing

Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ Tovli's Ten ~ regular ten/forty: Sleeping, bright, reflections, Eyes, other, grow, throats, together, infected, question

 

Perfection

Doesn’t exist  

It would infect and destroy us  

 

Our eyes grow

In admiration

Seeing the other weakness

 

Together

Throats laugh in recreation

When question has impossible answer

 

Sleeping

Our unperfected reflections

We love

 

The chaotic chasing

for bright dreams

 

Reviews

[Raivenne]

I like this contrast of chaos in a dream. Very nicely done within its contrast of a 10 word limmit yet 40 word maximum

[Tovli]

nice flow. tovli

[Frances O'Neill]

I like the idea of chaos in pursuit of bright dreams!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

It looks good. You used all ten words and did so within the 40-word maximum.