With out boundaries

Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ Fun with Form! "RONDELET" with Poeticpiers

 

I’m not afraid

Of faults or deficiencies

I’m not afraid

In me human waltzes are playd

Embracing all love theories

I become with out boundaries

I’m not afraid

 

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

excellent use of form ivor

[Belator Books]

A good rondelet in form, with a flippant dichotomy: the strict form off set by the free prose. Beware of accepting all theories, for sometimes they do not agree with one another when all mixed in one pot. Cheers.

[Poeticpiers]

Well done indeed. We are what we are imperfect but unique

[W.k.kortas]

I might make it "love's theories"...but anyone who attempts to rhyme "deficiencies" gets points for sheer bravery. Solidly done--flows well, keeps the thematic string going quite nicely.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Very Good!

[Helena]

As beautiful as you, my little free spirited 'angel with blue wings!' ~ Helena

[papaed]

Angelina,

Very nice. A wonderful concept to embrace love theories and to lose self-imposed boundaries in the process.

Only thing I'd change is 'plaid' to 'played.'

Peace and Love,
papaed

[Kevin Vorshak]

Well done Rondelet!