The boiling cream of the cream

POETRY CONTEST: Cr�me de la Cr�me of Writerscaf� - http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/7229/

 

As most human replaces love with guilt

I’m looking for the cream of the cream of wisdom

and go on and on inviting the Sun

Sun

Tattoo my body with your light

Imprint your thoughts in my head,

And my heart with your warmest rays

 

As most human creates separation and disharmony

I try to find the cream of the cream of ways of sharing

and simply by asking the Wind again and again

 

Wind

Blow your unique sounds
surround me with your countless expressions

And I let them echo in my head

As most human likes plant and grow pain

I’m searching for the cream of the cream of all that brings joy

and softly I pray every day to the Water

 

Water

Wash my soul with your tender caress

Let your melodies bath me

So my body will learn your embrace

 

As most human have forgotten the inward path

I try to ear the boiling cream of the cream of my consciousness

and every time I look at the Trees I call

Trees

Give me the taste of your peace

The silence smell you spread around
so I may open my arms, grow tall and know all

 

As most human wants to accumulate goods and gods

I’m seeking for the boiling cream of the cream of my balance  

and I murmur  repeatedly to  Nature

 

Nature

Let your ancient heart beat of my universe

Soak me with thousand lessons

So I may paint myself with them and shine

 

As most human crushes the individual voice

I want to be the boiling cream of the cream of a great researcher

and at anytime I shout to all the Universe

Universe

Let me be all the colors of your sounds
all the textures of your light

Wrap me for my eternity

 

And I want to become the best reflection

            The boiling cream of the cream

                        Of natural divine Humanity light!

Reviews

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AWESOME!
Great message passed through this colorful and detailed write!
Seems like you are a nature lover as well and it's very difficult to put those feelings into words - but you did it
And hats off for that
Wonderfully penned!

[Morning Song]

Sweetie, of all the people I know, you are the most natural person it's been my pleasure to meet, and you have indeed already achieved the "boiling cream of the cream." It's the REST of us who must seek the way, listening always to the sun, wind, water, trees, nature, and the universe for guidance. And to get a head start on the process, we can always come back here and read your enlightening poetry!!! And it's STILL as beautiful as I had remembered.

Great big hugs...
Jeri

[Nassira Merahi]

This is beautiful! It makes me want to read it over and over again. The colours add a special effect to it. Very wise and insightful poem Angelina... Excellent :)))
Salam

Nassira

[sammyXD]

This is really good. I like it!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

An Amazing Write

[Gandré]

Ah, what a wish! Thank you for entering my contest. I think the problem is our not living in harmony with our environment and that's why this poems makes lots of sense, it is an emotional prayer to give back the simultaneously sounded universe music notes to produce chords between everything what exists on earth, like it was before we became the super species, you are knitting a seamless fabring of lightening of wishes in sequence with a wonderful sleight of hand ....and an explosive invisible punctuationmarks.

[Phibby Venable]

angelina,
i love your use of elements. you have a beautiful flow and use of imagery! excellent.