To mold reality

Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ FUN WITH FORM ~ Urenga parameters, Japanese style devised by Poeticpiers

 

Talking and writing

So my dreams will become reality

To do what I say

I have this compulsion to exchange

Spreading my thoughts

 

                     To do what I say

                     I have this compulsion to exchange

                     Spreading my thoughts

                     I do it my way

                     I move on to open my own paths

 

       I do it my way

       I move on to open my own paths

       Connecting life flows

       Alert to all flying ideas

       I dream to mold reality

 

Author's Note

Urenga parameters, Japanese style devised by Poeticpiers
Details: Three five line stanzas / No obligation to rhyme

1st stanza: 1st line 5 syllables / 2nd line 10 syllables / 3rd line 5 syllables / 4th line 10 syllables / 5th line 6 syllables.
2nd stanza: Repeat lines three to five / 4th line 5 syllables / 5th line 8 syllables.
3rd stanza: Repeat lines four and five / 3rd line 5 syllables / 4th line 8 syllables / 5th line 8 syllables

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Urenga contest! I knew this one would be a winner.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on this winning poem. As I said before, a well written Urenga.

[SilentDream]

Love the message and your closing line especially.
Pen on :)
((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream

[Salvatore Buttaci]

"I dream to mold reality" is both a great line and a great concept. Good poem!

[Poeticpiers]

interesting content Dreams do precede reality good use of the form

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

A well written urenga

[emmajoy]

What a brilliant example of Urenga parameter - you have such technical skill as well as an extraordinary ability to always use magical phrases.. 'Connecting life flows Alert to all flying ideas I dream to mold reality

I think reading this over three times has helped me understand the technicalities of this form, so, thank you very much for that as well as sharing your gift.

[Gandré]

Hello Angi, I am sorry I didn't come around earlier. Indeed a mold reality is one which can be formed from anything! And yes, I loved "So my dreams will become realityTo do what I sayI have this compulsion to exchange Spreading my thoughts" ---when we believe at our ideas, they become true. It is obvious. (I wrote also about this, even physics can explain this). I also loved " I do it my way I move on to open my own paths" ----- individuality but not conformity is what we need! Loved those lines. hmm, wonderful. I see it happening. You will tell me, in a few? This was immediately comprehensible achievement of female power, complexities written in few lines, everything is evolving! wonderful. favorite.

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Yes, you do, Angi---and quite beautifully I must add. Pen on, my friend! :-) Sharon