Take seven breaths!

Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ with Tovli - a poem using all ten words with no more and no less than ten lines (10 words in violet)

 

Philosophically completing the world

Observing and examining how old people saw the world

Opened to the cycle of changes  

Advancing in the art of living in a dynamic way

 

Future is the will to grow, in inner rhythm and balance  

Senses of navy flooding cells and vital physical red flames

Buildings of void resulting in walk peace, love and self truth reflection

 

 

Bankrupt?! “Only if empty you can be filled”! Take seven breaths!

 

 

Poetics are elements governing our cycles like encircling planets

Either we accept wisdom in chaos, or we sit down and cry

 

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

I love the flow.. and the unique style... beautiful.. Thank you for the review on Broken Crystals

Magic

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning the Tovli contest!

[Helena]

Ah yes, fanatastic the way you incorporated the words into a very
philosophical write. Much enjoyed! Thank you for joining Tovli's
Story/poem 10! ~ Helena

[Gandré]

Ha! This is quite something! At first glance I see your vision is throwing-away dualism, completion as a loop in nonlinearity and brief jottings on the page of creation. Self-explaining world, everything is one "Poetics are elements governing our cycles like encircling planets ", and everything is intelligent. Fantastic, unconventional, experimental poetry.

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Loved the way you incorporated all the words into your poem with a super ending. :-) Sharon

[The DuchessPoet]

Excellent use the words and and wonderful message that you created with the instruction that was given to you!

I enjoyed every aspect of this write!

The Duchess,

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Wonderful use of the given ten words, especially the ending!

Sal

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Well done!