Oracles

Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ Tovli's 10/40: a poem no more, no less than 40 words using the following ten words, in following order: lightly /layered/ darkness/ flashes/ branches / wet / stirring / shiver / remains / woman

 

Cards, runes, pennies, horoscopes

Lightly layered upon a table

Problems darkness flashes

Into branches of wet stirring questions

Possibilities shiver in my head

The remains of problems

               Ying woman, Yang man

               Young-old, strong-weak

Are just questions

Looking for creative answers!

Reviews

[Helena]

I can't add anymore to what the others have said Angi, except that I enjoyed this
wonderful descriptive write so very much..... well done indeed! Thank you for submitting
this to Tovli's Ten! ~ Helena

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Great 10/40

[Fran Marie]

I like this a lot! great format

and very good use of the ten words this week!~

WelL DonE!!

Fran Marie

[Tovli]

love the ying and yang approach--tovli

[Hanan_Maliah]

Wow...I did enjoy this! Very well written...even though this is not my style I did enjoy this greatly!

[Gandré]

aww this was a delicious poem, written with such an ease, and a fantastic pointe - last lines. I hope you win. I think I never could write something like this, by given words. My admiration! Good luck! the whole world is waiting or creative answers, perhaps? We run out of ideas? We need diversity! love, lara.

[J.K. (Not Rowling)]

This poem itself was a "creative answer" to this contest. Nice job!