Formulas

Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ Poeticpiers ~ "Cornish Sonnet" =

^{_{To sit and wait for the right formula, I refuse}}

^{_{Joining pieces, fragmented by time and space}}

_{^{I do as it comes and goes and I decide to use}}

_{^{Writing ideas, discuss my dreams and different themes}}

_{^{I share what comes, not afraid to give my face}}

_{^{Not ashamed of being wrong or change rhythms}}

 

 

_{^{I’m constantly building myself on top of ideas I get}}

_{^{From words I hear and read from people I never saw}}

^{_{Sharing what I know, believe, think and have met}}

^{_{Not ashamed to give you the formulas unpolished}}

^{_{So you may work on top of them as they are raw}}

^{_{Formulas that, by you will be refined}}

 

_{^{I give all I know for you to use}}

^{_{Give me all experimental formulas you get}}

Reviews

[Gandré]

Hi Angi,
this was a metaphysical experiment on poet's creation.
sweet, looking for formulas, we do it permanently, everything
has to be in equilibrium. sometimes we are seekers a life time,
when I see people and they tell me their stories, then they are
the seeker of fragmented pieces putting them strenuously together.
thanks also for your comment on my 2 pieces. I don't agree fully 100 %
with the one on DECEIT for our acting is strongly influenced by
the collective consciousness and it was not me who made this emperor
strong and rich, the others did, mostly they hold their chair so that
they would not lose it. So what I can do - at least I don't offer him
respect, in fact, I have compassion with his unsatisfying poetry...
You made in this review - many great points, I liked!!
hug thanks again
l.g.

[Helena]

"To sit and wait for the right formula, I refuse
Joining pieces, fragmented by time and space
I do as it comes and goes and I decide to use
Writing ideas, discuss my dreams and different themes
I share what comes, not afraid to give my face
Not ashamed of being wrong or change rhythms"

Angi, another wonderful write from you. Thanks for sharing and submitting
this to Ivor's Form contest! ~ Helena

[Poeticpiers]

rules and regulations are on the whole guidelines but you must understand them before you break them to suit your purposes.

tnjoyed your presenation of your thoughts

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Very well done.

Sal