Be Alert!

Albert's Poetry Cafe ~"Diminished Hexaverse" with Salvatore Buttaci! HEXAVERSE: stanzas of 5 lines/ 4 lines /3 lines/ 2 lines/ one word - syllables =5, 1st stanza/ 4, 2nd stanza, etc.

 

Wake up! Be alert!

 

To be conscious

 

aware of signals

 

breathe your journeys   

 

absorb, process

 

 

 

 

Life’s current

 

changes are here

 

Use all lessons

 

be flexible

 

 

 

 

Don’t be

 

afraid

 

 

 

wander

 

 

 

                  …. And wonder!

 

Author's Note

:) Sorry! I couldn't resist to add the last "... And wonder!" because it become important!

Reviews

[Helena]

"Don't be

afraid

"wander

�. And wonder!"

Yes, I loved that, it worked very well. Wonderful write, thanks for sharing Angi!

Sal is right, not following form Angi!.......but my dear Blue Angel Wings knowing you,
you like to colour outside the lines! Hugs ~ Helena ;)

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Please go back and count the syllables so you are following the syllable count for each line. A few are not precise, but the poem is very good.

Sal

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Nicely done!

[angelina neves]

this posting thing is not acting as it should and i can't understand it! First it came all jamed up and now with a different tipe of letter! Well i hope is not too difficult to read!