PASSION

another try! A COIN POEM: Line 1 has 7 syllables; line 2 has 5 syllables; line 3 has 7 syllables; line 4 has 5 syllables. The rhyme pattern is either abcb or aabb

 

I wish to understand you:
Melt, drink you fully…

Fed up, drunken, discharge you

And sleep restfully!

Reviews

[Gandré]

This was the most perfect description of passion I've read on this site. wow, I love this one very much. The Stoics said that only the wise man is free; and one’s mind is indeed not free when it is possessed by a great passion, for then one cannot will as one should, i.e. with proper deliberation. It is in that way that God (ergo Greater Mind) alone is perfectly free, and the created minds are free only in proportion as they are above passion. wonderful writing.

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Powerful words in the space of poetic genius!

Sal

[Lance]

This says it all...short but sweet. Lance

[Conversations Kill]

almost like medicine...

[Gandré]

A wonderful experimental poem dealing with paradoxism of discharge someone for loving him. Wonderful. thanks for your thoughts while reviewing my new poem. Hope all is well. hugs. L.