�What can we do?�

�What can we do?�

A Poem by angelina neves
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:) trying harder : A COIN POEM: Line 1 has 7 syllables; line 2 has 5 syllables; line 3 has 7 syllables; line 4 has 5 syllables. The rhyme pattern is either abcb or aabb

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The union that will empower 
 “We” application…
 
The personal inaction
Making us weaker!

© 2008 angelina neves


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Application versus inaction; we versus WEAker; nice play on words - even better for being true.
John

Posted 16 Years Ago


Yes, for We = 1 + 1 = 1 You gave qualities and abilities to the expression of your relationship. wow. Loved it.
I never will undersand why they say, 1 +1 = 2.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on November 2, 2008