Perfume vessels

Albert's Poetry Caf� challenge: 10 Word Poem�any form, any orde: Cast � features � English - glint � clear � death � sacrament - warrior � pious � way

 

Perfume vessels

Arabic, Chinese, English or French

They are sights of death glint

 

Flowers pious smells

 

Perfume vessels

Sacrament of flowers inside hopes

Features of long fingers

 

Search for peace

 

Perfume vessels

Hands stretching its way out

To cast a clear spell:

 

- Warrior mentality

Forget about fight

Plant love

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

You always know how to finagle words so they come out smelling like roses! I love your work.

Sal

[Tovli]

nicely ended--a blend of imagery and story. loved it--and guess what, this has nothing to do with the poem--but you have no idea how helpful it is to have the ten words highlighted! Really!!!!! thanks--tovli

[Helena]

Wow, awesome Angi. Well done indeed. Loved each and every stanza....
and I too liked your ending:

"- Warrior mentality
Forget about fight
Plant love"

Beautiful words!

Hugs
Helena

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

I really liked your ending, Angi! Peace and love, Sharon