sensible cords

Albert's Poetry Caf� - 10 WORD �Menke Sonnet�: pretending /morning / sensible/ walking / pretence / swallow / lost/ returns /bother /bad (Poem that goes from 2-15 syllables or 15 to 2 syllables and can be a Double)

 

Morning

Paper rainbow

Waking up clocks

Pretending it is sunny

Swallow the early day energy

Walking my pretence to be needed

Indispensable, important for the world

And everyone calmly or nervous passes by me

Indifferently people don’t bother looking twice

As a bad feeling creeps in from somewhere

Doubt returns touching sensible cords

Who am I? What am I doing here?

Am I just running around lost?

Only a moon heart beat

Dreaming places

In my nights

So light!

Reviews

[Helena]

Angi this was outstanding! And a 'double' Menke to boot! Wow, another awesome
entry for Tovli's Menke 10!

I said it before and I'll say it again.....could not choose between the three
entries, so thank goodness the judging is not up to me.

Good luck Tovli, you're going to need it! If I was able, I would change the
awards to three equal winners! rotfl

~ Helena :)