Invent

inspired by Albert's Poetry Caf� challenge with Tivoli 10/40 words: dust / only / paint / alibi/ through/ pencil/ property / sprayed / organize/ borrow - but not folowing the rules!

 

 

Dust paint  

…alibi nets

… …sprayed through life

… … … by the anger and frustration

 

Our limitation 

 

Invent

…a pencil?  

… …with magic property  

… … …only to borrow

 

The love light

  

Organize

… a different revolution

… …getting the ability to see

… … … hearts opening

 

Fly to freedom

 

………………………...........…….(Oh! Please!

                              Let me put the same 40 words

                           in another order, a new meaning…)

 

Dust paint  

 

… … … by the anger and frustration

… … …only to borrow

… … … hearts opening

 

Our limitation 

 

… …sprayed through life

… …with magic property  

… …getting the ability to see

 

Invent

 

…alibi nets

… a pencil?  

… a different revolution

 

The love light

 

Organize

 

Fly to freedom

Reviews

[Salvatore Buttaci]

My favorite lines:

Dust paint �alibi nets � �sprayed through life � � � by the anger and frustration

Beautiful! You are definitely way up there on the poet ladder.

Sal

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Rules or no rules, I enjoyed how you used the ten words in both poems! :-) Sharon

[emmajoy]

What an incrdible use of the given words and the highlighting of them really adds another dimension, intentional or not.

Good luck with the contest. Thank you for sharing. :-)