Loneliness

Albert's Poetry Café - LONELINESS

 

Loneliness

Misperception dwelling
the impression of no connections

Grief emerges

With the loss of conscious’ bridge

The ability to become independent

Human infancy denying growing

 

Loneliness

Refusing to listen to the sounds

Coming from near and far

Denying seeing

How everything is forever connected

And you can never be alone

 

Loneliness

Pursuing fantasies

Coming from mothers womb’s warmth

Searching for a special soul mate

Like a grain of sand in the desert

In a Ocean of billions of souls

 

Loneliness

Moving hopes onto others hands

Putting love into others heart

Letting obstacles and handicaps

Get hold of your life

Forgetting the myriad of webs

Those starting inside you

Echoing trough the Universe

 

Loneliness

Refusing to voice your uniqueness

Exercise your independence

To be happy and freely

Connected with all

Making a difference with every breath

Contributing to the human unity

Reviews

[angelinmypocket]

Angie...I like this wonderful write a lot. It envisions lonliness as a state of mind, not a state of reality. And you're right. No one is ever really alone if they have a life of any kind. Just in living daily life, we interact with many others who impress upon us our place in the natural order of humanity. We are all connected, spiritually if not visibly or physically.
Love/Liz/angelinmypocket

[Helena]

Wonderful poem Angi! I loved each stanza describing the state of "loneliness"
throughout this great write.

One stanza one stood out for me particularly...

"Loneliness
Refusing to listen to the sounds
Coming from near and far
Denying seeing
How everything is forever connected
And you can never be alone."

Good job! Thank you for "Keeping the Dream Alive"! ~

~ Helena ~

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is great! So raw and full of emotions...Dark indeed!
Great work!

[S.J.Floreen]

Very much how we all are. I enjoyed the poem and the flow of it.

[Nassira Merahi]

What a beautiful poem you have written here! I love this stanza very much:
"Loneliness
Misperception dwelling
the impression of no connections
Grief emerges
With the loss of conscious' bridge
The ability to become independent
Human infancy denying growing"
The mind plays a big role in making us feel or deny things ... whatever state we are finding ourselves into!
Very powerful write:) Thank you

Salam to you :)

[emmajoy]

You've written words, created contact with the reader, invited him or her into your mind and 'talked' more about what's beneath the phrases and stanzas and so forth. In your loneliness there's a need to find self, to hold onto self.

Great post, thank you for sharing it.

[Gandré]

Excellent I believe that "style" often announces a superb writer. I knew who this poet is. Thus can many acclaimed poets be identified by their "style". I liked best the lines..... "Moving hopes onto others handsPutting love into others heartLetting obstacles and handicapsGet hold of your life". truly beautiful.

[Gandré]

Excellent I believe that "style" often announces a superb writer. I knew who this poet is. Thus can many acclaimed poets be identified by their "style". I liked best the lines..... "Moving hopes onto others handsPutting love into others heartLetting obstacles and handicapsGet hold of your life". truly beautiful.