The adventure of creation

Albert's Poetry Café - TEN WORD CHALLENGE :adventure/ distinguishing/ achieve/ coherence/ affirms/ alliance/ beings/ useless/ poetry/ others

The adventure of creation 

To achieve wonderful beings to love

Ethereal places to fly 

Colorful flowers to smell

Special textures to touch 

Coherence is not necessary

Distinguishing reality and dream

Is a useless exercise

As turning others into a fantasy

Makes them as real as they should be!

Poetry is painting and singing emotion

In a wide white empty space

As wind blowing word alliance

With the soft clouds of ideas 

And the sand castles ideals 

Affirms the possibility 

Of all that seams impossible!

Reviews

[S.J.Floreen]

I think there are a few errors here, but otherwise I liked it very much. The true heart of what it is to be a poet.

[Gandré]

...The artifact of developing new meaning is a wholeness that has been brought into existence by YOU now+here, it is always a wonder to see a new form, a new pattern where I've been taken.... I thought you managed nicely tto use all the required words, and kept it abstract, indeed often this is impossible, often it is, what we create with our words. Thank you that you brought this thought into my mind. Good luck in the contest, Angi!

[emmajoy]

Great creation from the given words... congratulations are definitely in order.

Somehow, probably because of your skill, you've managed to birth a sensitive poem yet followed the format required.

Thank you again for sharing.