a good spell

Albert's Poetry Café - RONDELET

Trying out a good spell

Invitation for a washing away all fear

Trying out a good spell

Like flying dreamy balloons of whishing you well

Find out secretes behind secretes of frozen tear

Burying hells giving space for ideas to come clear

Trying out a good spell

Author's Note

RONDELET: A septet or seven line stanza with two rhymes and a refrain - the refrain is six syllable (Tetrasyllabic) or four syllables ( Dimeter) . The rest of the lines are twice as long (8/12 syllables) Tetrameter - Rhyme pattern : A / B / A /A / b / b /A - A signifying the repetitive refrain.

* Note: I would love if I could place the 4th line at the end, before the �refrain�! but then I would �spoil� the �Rondelet�!!!
:( sad!!

Reviews

[fireblossom]

I wish you were nearby. I would sit at your table and learn. This Rondelet is so expressive. Crazy sounding while communicating everything intended. :-)

[Salvatore Buttaci]

I like your rondelet. Just one suggestion: correct the spelling of "secrets." It is not spelled "secretes."
I always try to spell-check my poems because once I lost a poetry contest because I did not look over my work and I had misspelled a couple of words.

Sal

[Donald Meikle]

Please tell me the missed spelling was deliberate, it makes the whole effort hilariously funny.

[Gandré]

this was interessting. wanderfully creative, something else. i liked "frozen tear".

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

I'll take "good" any day! I'm certainly no expert on this form, but I thought your poem made sense. :-) Sharon

[Last Lying Look]

catchy. i like it.