Disciplining word (into a PETRARCHAN SONNET)

Albert's cafe CONTEST: A 'PETRARCHAN SONNET"

Disciplining word and line rhyme

Not letting them just flow from the heart or mind

But by some scheme you called up and find 

In an instruction book collection with strange name

Words becoming puzzle pieces of a refine game

Of how to use language expression of the kind

Painting inside given lines exercise bind

In an enriched intellectual form that will bring fame!

Uf! So much trouble to inject a single nuance

And all looks too stiff to feel the joy tingling

The kind of free words that make our body dance

Or the animation of music the ocean is now playing

Floods of spume waves exploding by chance 

The true nature, never disciplined, song bursting!

Author's Note

The Petrarchan Sonnet consists of many rhymed lines, more than any other sonnet. This is much easier to accomplish in Italian, a language more rich in rhyming words, than in English. The first eight lines create an octave, with the rhyme scheme a b b a a b b a. The last six lines make up a sestet and may consist of following rhyme schemes: 1) c d e c d e 2) c d e d c e 3) c d c d c d.

Reviews

[Helena]

You have outdone yourself Angi, and that's no mean feat!

For one who never likes to "keep within the lines" you've penned one awesome Petrarchan Sonnet here!
I loved what your muse did with this simply brilliant write. What talent flows from your pen....I am in complete awe!

Thank you for submitting this to our new form challenge!

Love and Light
Helena

[Gandré]

The kind of free words that make our body danceOr the animation of music the ocean is now playingFloods of spume waves exploding by chance The true nature, never disciplined, song bursting!-----------wonderful writing , my dear awesome, how you explain us the Petrarchan Sonnet and how your trial was perfect not only technically but also in its meaning. loved lines


" The kind of free words that make our body danceOr the animation of music the ocean is now playingFloods of spume waves exploding by chance The true nature, never disciplined, song bursting!"