I�m Imperfection

Hello Perfection!

I’m Imperfection

Please to meet you!

 

I collect experiences

Of being pregnant with life

A mother, a friend, a lover

But I forgot to collect impressions

Of being indispensable

And my agenda is never booked up

I collect time to make nothing

And do everything I like

As dancing with a baby in my arms

Or writing down my thoughts

Not worried if they will be published

 

I know, Perfection

you like to think you are indispensable

And you have not much time

to spend, waist, share or spare

with little nonsense’s of life

But, understand, Perfection

I’m Imperfection!

 

I collect independence

The freedom thinking feeling

I don’t collect shame and faults

I’m never ashamed to collect pleasure!

I collect the music singing in my head

And the feelings of looking at the moon

I collect my observations

About life, people and beauty

A breeze coming from the sea

Caressing my face

I don’t care to collect evaluations

As I have nothing to prove

 

I know, Perfection

you love to have high marks

At everything, every where, all the time

And you aim to be the best, the better

And would like to be most important

Well, as I told you, Perfection:

I’m Imperfection!

 

I collect the privilege of valuing

Each piece of me

collect ways to respect others

And refuse to collect any kind of slavery

Spying our life trough every window

I don’t collect demons

I collect interesting things in life!

I collect things you can’t see!

I don’t need to kip them safe In a bank

or behind close doors

No one can rob them from me!

 

I know, Perfection

you love what shows out

What makes a good impression

and shines brigh

In being a slave of working

With time agendas

And duties and sacrifices

Saving everything in banks

And you have to defend your self

from that collection of demons

you have to create!

I know, Perfection

I’m just Imperfection!

 

I never collect chocolates but tastes

Smells, sounds, feelings

I buy books just to collect ideas!

I have a collection of warm smiles

Embraces, whispered love words…

 

I see, Perfection!

My collections are of no interest to you

 

Any way, Perfection

it was nice to have met you

And I’m sorry you can never convince me

I still prefer to be the freely Imperfection!

 

 

Reviews

[Gabrielle E. M. T.]

This is very complex.
Cool conversation.
No one is ever perfect.
The color choice really has a nice effect.
This piece is wonderful.
I loved it.
Awesme poem.
Excellent flow of words.
Great structure.
Nice rythme.
Wonderfully written.
Great Job!
^_^

[Pandy7197]

very complex and wonderful way to present yourself! I love it! Showing both sides! Great write

[The Mad Prophet]

Light and Darkness bickering about ideas. Perfection has views and barely see Imperfection. I don't think Perfection was talking to Imperfection, he such a stuck up. Anyway good poem, love the coversation.

[Suelou]

Very well written. No one is ever perfect. They may like to make themselves appear to be, but they aren't. We all make mistakes, and hopefully learn from them. All we can do is strife to do our best.

[Pinky]

nicely done i love the colors!

[Vonnette]

Wonderful! Well done, nicely said. What a beautiful view to have on life. I should print this and put it on my fridge! So many of us pursue that illusive state of perfection. What's the point? It's not just the idea of rejecting perfection you articulate, but also the idea of shame, faults, and demons. What a concept. I absolutely love this!

[Mistral Bilgera]

this is pretty good! i like how you animated imperfection, and the poetic justification of imperfection is really awesome! keep it up!