When?

When?

A Poem by angelina neves

 

Waving

colors

in the sea

of my blood

 

drizzle

voice

in the windmill

of my mind

 

desirable being

to my body

 

un-submissive

to my willing

 

When

When

When will you come back?

 

To that unbind liberty

of a poet

painting

love

 

in secret

words

whispered

through out the Universe

 

just for me…

 

 

© 2008 angelina neves


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like a waterfall, the words tumble into meaning--well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I appreciate the atmospheric undertones that are latent within the message, especially when in search for an unknow source of validation. I also enjoy the simplistic flow of words that ruminate faint whispers as if undulating through the liquid void of the universe.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on June 3, 2008
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