Thunder

Chock: oh oh

 

A thunder storm brakes

Wind, lights in the sky

The rain is full of ghosts tonight

Moveming all around

Commotion

Generate terror, horror

 

Awaking the fear

Agitates

Reminds danger

Losses

Emmotion move you

Getting stronger

Inciting the movement

 

Stop!

 

Everything stops

Silence...

Carefully looking around

Bringing the internal tranquility

Returning to serenity

The rains and winds

Are moving on

always in the move

Incessantly, with out rest,

 

There is a need to stop

Even your actions

Avoiding mistakes

 

Peacefulness comes

Breathing calmly

Thinking

Reflecting

 

Perplexity:

- How beautiful is a thunderstorm!

 

Laughs: ah ah

 

 

Reviews

[angelinmypocket]

A great write for the phrase. Thunderstorms can be very frightening when one is caught up in the devastation they can cause. But by the same token, the sound of gentle rainfall can be very calming.
Love...Liz/angelinmypocket

[Suelou]

A wonderful entry for the challenge.

[Deborah Shepard]

Bravo enjoyed this

[Tovli]

very different. the imagery was well done--tovli

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Nature is beautiful, isn't it! Even the fury of a thunderstorm has a wonder and beauty that demands our attention as much as our respect. :-) Sharon