Rolling song

Hands in hands

Eyes in eyes

Dry lips

Salty tears

Rivers and mountains

Cold and hot

Love and hate

Life

Hands in hands

Eyes in eyes

A smile

Tenderness

Hugs

Spring and the sea

lovers

Life!

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

At first I thought you had written "A Waltz poem"....I just had to count the stanza's beat. It was a wonderful flowing write with enchanting lines. Thank you for your poem and good luck in the contest!

Helena

[angelina neves]

Thank you very much!
ummmmm... May be i could try and Waltz it instead of rock it!
(how does the Waltz go? 1,2,3 or something like that?) eh eh eh eh

[Helen Crutchett]

I think it is 1, 2 ,3, 2,1 and so on......? Oh I don't know!!! I'll have to ask the master of Waltz wave, Tovli lol

[angelina neves]

eh eh eh eh ...
may bi for another contest!
love

[Helen Crutchett]

At first I thought you had written "A Waltz poem"....I just had to count the stanza's beat. It was a wonderful flowing write with enchanting lines. Thank you for your poem and good luck in the contest!

Helena

[Michael X]

Captivating form defines this soulfully inspired writing with an absolute constitution, romantically
invented to precise detail, your imagery flows with grace, there is awhispered effect accentuating
the voice of the heart, the emeotional imagery is embracing and sets the readers thought adrift,
floating on the sea you so gracefully describe, surrounded by waters of love, eyes emanting soul.
written in essence, every well placed word adds to the spellbound environment, lovely.

[poddar kushal]

this piece is really jazzy. i am sure you are finding a language of your own

[Moons]

Xicora��o!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And a ... tender ... smile ...