Rainbow light

Rainbow light

A Poem by angelina neves
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http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/FUN-WITH-FORM-~-ACROSTIC-/53952/ Helene Acrostic : letter of each line spells a word, using the same words as in the title.

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Rain drops

a ray of sun light

in between the clouds

nothing is lighter than air

bending in an arch

of colors painting

wonders in the blue sky

 

lost in marigold recollections

infinite questions  unanswered

go naked through illusions

highlighting  endless beginnings

the entangled passing of time

 

© 2017 angelina neves


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Beautifully written acrostic, Angelina. Rainbows are so special. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


angelina neves

7 Years Ago

yes, they are! like magic in the sky!
thank you for reading!
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Gee
''Tis a clever piece of writing.


Posted 7 Years Ago


angelina neves

7 Years Ago

thank you!
Great job. I enjoyed reading this so much.

Posted 7 Years Ago


angelina neves

7 Years Ago

thank you very much for your comment!.
Alice Maria

7 Years Ago

You're welcome 😊
Great last line. ( Can I borrow it.)
Heading to the pot of gold now.

Posted 7 Years Ago


angelina neves

7 Years Ago

of course you can use it! borrow, take it, as you like it! for me it will be a great honor! Tank you.. read more
Wow.. very clever and beautiful the way you selected and weaved the words!

Posted 7 Years Ago


angelina neves

7 Years Ago

thank you so much!
What a beautiful acrostic it is. As beautiful as a rainbow itself.!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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angelina neves

7 Years Ago

thank you very much! it is always lovely to know someone likes!
This is such a beautiful acrostic! Wow


Posted 7 Years Ago


angelina neves

7 Years Ago

thank you so much for reading and the lovely comment!
As lovely as a rainbow itself! Nicely done, Sharon

Posted 7 Years Ago


angelina neves

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading and the lovely comment
You painted a very beautiful visual beauty with your words. A joy to read!

Helena

Posted 7 Years Ago


angelina neves

7 Years Ago

xxxx thank you! it is lovely to know you like it!
Helena

7 Years Ago

My pleasure entirely!
What a beautiful poem on rainbow light in acrostic form. I loved it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


angelina neves

7 Years Ago

thank you so much for reading and living your appreciation!
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome. ☺
(I guess you meant leaving)
angelina neves

7 Years Ago

yes! sorry! leaving!

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