i'm dangerous

i'm dangerous

A Poem by angelina neves

The original sin never existed!

Only the original innocence That is dangerous!

~ OSHO ~

 

I’m dangerous!

I follow the road I have freely chosen

The way that leads to feast

And eat, and have friends!

I follow the river

Where there is always new things

to be learn

Where I can grow

Into something better and bigger!

Oh!

I’m very dangerous!

I’m drifted by the dreams of the moment

I’m not rigid;

I like to laugh

I’m not angry,

I love to hug

To smell

To taste the colors of life

Not holding to what is believed

Not to change, to be always certain!

I’m dangerous!

Knowing that sometimes

I have to stop and wait

But, as waiting

I meditate

Look around, try to learn

How to get near my dreams!

I’m dangerous!

I believe in human kind

In unconditional love

I believe in life’s wonders

In beauty

In the soul made material

Through the expression of art!

Oh!

I’m very dangerous!

Be careful!

I create!

And I’m happy with myself!

I have the light that shines

And brightens my way!

I know how to use my heart

And like an innocent child,

I’m not afraid!

© 2008 angelina neves


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"I'm very, very dangerous!
Be careful!
I create! "

Dangerous in a good way....all artists are feared in a closed society. Never telling what they will see through creative eyes. If you are dangerous, I must be drawn to danger myself, for I always enjoy your words. Lydia



Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this is really nice, we should never be afraid to be who we genuinely are, thats the whole point of creation
"like an innocent child im not afraid"...

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is great! I love how you expressed yourself! There are so many people out there that want others to be one thing. I like how this poem says its alright to be different but be careful because its dangerous! Great write!

Posted 16 Years Ago


I'm dangerous!
I believe in human kind
In unconditional love"

angi, this immaculate poem of passion sent a small stream of continuous chills, the passion you pen
from the soul flows like vibrant, sparkling stream, alive and refreshing in its beautiful glimmer,
reflecting the light of warmth and love, enchanting, you speak to the masses with an ode to embrace
the coldest of hearts with revelation, divine, loved this writing, your poertic heart soars beyond
the grayest skies, i love the conceot and skill put forth, as penned with truth in hand.


Posted 16 Years Ago


I'm very dangerous!
"Be careful!
I create!
And I'm happy with myself!
I have the light that shines
And brightens my way!
I know how to use my heart
And like an innocent child,
I'm not afraid!"

Outstanding piece, causing one to think about where they stand. I like the intro, no original sin, very good philosophy, very true.
Well done.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Excellent.... a call to arms to those who think and a challenge to those who fall into line

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Um cora��o aberto, lindo, perigoso, oh t�o, mas t�o perigoso...doce, ternurentamente perigoso!!!!! Xicora��o!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very dangerous indeed. You dare have an original thought in your head. :) Another great poem.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it makes you dangerous and unique.......this poem describes me so of course i like it........very well worded.........someone who is not affraid, could be dangerous huh........living life.....too short to be a prude..........cool poem...........

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hello dear, thanks a lot for liking my poem. I found this refreshing to see the word creation midst in the creativeness "How to get near my dreams!" --------this was wonderful.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"I'm very, very dangerous!
Be careful!
I create! "

Dangerous in a good way....all artists are feared in a closed society. Never telling what they will see through creative eyes. If you are dangerous, I must be drawn to danger myself, for I always enjoy your words. Lydia



Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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