Savage saxophones spell

Savage saxophones spell

A Poem by angelina neves

 


Carefully caressing chills
Analyzing aerial alliances
Sculpturing sand sanctuary
Tangible thoughts tides
Immune intuition impulse
Naked nectar needs
Gathering galaxies glimmer

Mentioning
You

Tales reinventing tangos
Oasis of odes in oceans
Magnetism of magic words
Orange open operas
Races of radiant reds
Rivers running rainbows
Organs oozing offers
Waltz of wander waves
Sailing in salt and sugar

Irrevocable
Navigator

Blend blinking blues
Refreshing romantic refuges
Imagination immortal identity
Labyrinth of liquid ladders
Longitude lunatic loop
Imbue of immense illusions
Architect arranging auras
Nestling natural nectarine
Telescopic therapeutic tact

Harmonic hymn habitat
Unique universal unguent
Effuse efflorescing exchange
Savage saxophones spell

 

© 2008 angelina neves


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Wonderful Acrostic Angi. Very well thought out....alliteration awesome throughout.

Beautiful visions to ponder upon. I loved this poem. Well done indeed.



Posted 16 Years Ago


angi, this eloquent poem is written with a puncuated artisticness, in way of colorful, vibrant wording,
encapturing form, has a free flowing effect, wow i love the thought behind every emotive sentence,
acrostic wisdom shines through every intriguing sentence,
Sailing in salt and sugar".. what an absolute steelar combination of metaphorical intrique shadowing
the sincere beauty and mind scape of overcoming emotions, bringing worlds to life,
leaves the reader wih a feeling of added encouraged knowledge,
Casting my tomorrows in brilliant hues"

Posted 16 Years Ago


Great! I like the idea here.
Gathering galaxies glimmer, just as they appear to do from the proper distance as they move together.

Posted 17 Years Ago


I'm not usually a big fan of acrostics. This is so clever and beautiful. You've done a fabulous job!

Posted 17 Years Ago


"Casting my tomorrows in brilliant hues!" WOW, Angi, this is a fantastic acrostic! Spiritually beauty in every line. A journey of sweet serenity! Lydia

Posted 17 Years Ago



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