Flow

All your hours are wings flapping

Deep down inside my heart

The road of your journey

Runs right into my door

The sea of your dreams

Flood my wandering eyes

The waves of your thoughts

Melt against my chest

Form the river of your pain

I drink my sadness

And I wish…

oh! How I whish

I could be a greater alchemist

So that the meanders of my joys

Could become a big sea

Where you would easily swim

Relaxing from your fatigues

And the essences of my hopes

And the best of my dreams

Like a big shining river

Could flow singing at your door

And my way trough this world

Could trace a trail to your thoughts

And warp them with tenderness…

Reviews

[Michael X]

All your hours are wings flapping, so many favorite lines i could not choose a favorite,
you did a stellar job at creating a metaphorical vision, the entire idea is enchantingly
original, i admire the way you are able to play on words with images that set the readers
soul in poetic flight, wonderful job on this writing ang.

[Gandré]

this is about the perfect healing. so no funeral of hearts
:=) i enjoyed it my dear. thx for reading my poem.

[October]

This is a beautiful poem.
It flows very well.

[Everett DeValle]

Beautifully done my friend. This flowed from the depths of your soul. ~Ev

[Blue Bard]

This is beautiful writing. It does indeed flow. I love so many of your phrases:
wings flapping

Deep down

inside my heart

How I whish

I could be a greater alchemist

So that the meanders of my joys

Could become a big sea

Where you would easily swim

Just stellar writing. I'm glad you stopped by to review my stuff. You really have talent.

[Lydia Shutter]

Angi, your words are always a pleasure to read. So gentle and flowing. They weave themselves through my heart. The concept of joys becoming a sea is so overwhelmingly serene! Lydia

[Sean Allen]

How beautifully you have put these words together. The piece definately flows as I read it.
Donn