Universal tickles

(restaured!)

Universal tickles

pens with keyboard

swings in letters

alphabetic masks

and poetic dreams

thoughts smiling

a Universal smile!

 

- who needs a punishing god

to put sins in twinkling stars?

 

Universal tickles

light as a feather

playing the blues

rocking stones dancing

with wings flapping

the moon light hugging

a universal hug!

 

- who needs a sadistic father

violating all that is happiness?

 

Universal tickles

magic desires in words

with feet walking

over Oceans

crossing the jungles

of time and space

embracing the beauty

of a Universal embrace!

 

- who needs prehistoric leaders

feeding on victimization and sacrifices?

 

Universal tickles

the wet skin

like drops of water

raining over the land

dissolving the pain

creating new brilliant ideas

humans sparkling

a universal sparkle!

 

- who needs a spying from above

to criticize each movement of joy?

 

Universal tickles

as energy flowing

listening to the vibrations

of the body expressing

through movements voicing

the need to linger

into love

a universal love!

 

- who needs guns and bombs

organizing investments in destruction?

 

Universal tickles

softly, delicately, sincerely

and openly proposing:

- Dream a new reality!

Invent a universal specimen

filled with pleasure

and laugh the universal laugh!

 

Reviews

[Morning Song]

Who needs negativity is true, dear friend, when we can live, laugh and love within a universal reality of positive energy?

"Invent a universal specimen
filled with pleasure
and laugh the universal laugh!"

Oh yes, Angi. I want to invent that universal specimen, where all men are brothers, and love reigns supreme. I want to sparkle in that universal embrace. I want to drown myself in your words, and dance in the sunshine.

Great big hugs, dear friend...
Jeri

[poddar kushal]

a great writing

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

What a kinder and gentler world it would be if we could just learn to love all others as our brothers and sisters! Thanks for sharing your beautiful vision for a better tomorrow. Hugs, Sharon

[Phillip William Allen]

Beautiful in conception, and a wish that many hold. Unfortunately it just don't work this way in real life. Too many negative minds in the world.

[Helena]

"Universal tickles" what a great concept. Delightful poem and its made my day my dear friend!
I too feel like dancing ~ in a meadow with daffodils right now!! Don't know why this reminded me of daffodils, probably because they are sunny and happy!! Simply beautiful :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Your words assist the reader in "crossing the jungles of time and space". Your compassionate thoughts and prayers for peace are so lovely, dear one. Yes, if the universe could only be tickled by your dreams, we would all live in a happier place. Your poetry is so enjoyable! Lydia