Let us

Let me be the coffee

You will be the cream

Let us be the potion

That the universe will drink

So magically mixed

That, completely satisfied,

The all universe will sing!

 

Let me be the arms

You will be the legs

Let us make an embrace

So wonderfully enlaced

That, persuaded and pleased,

The all universe will dance!

 

Let me be the earth

You will be the sky

Let’s create a pledge of fidelity

of all that is alive, all human race,

With such lively grace

That, happily will be accepted

By all in the Universe!

Reviews

[Michael Lasalle]

Angi, your perspective is truly insighttful wisdom,
and leaves the reader with an added sense of knowledge,
your metaphorical imagery is sweeping, this poem
speaks of a unity kind of love, thanks for sharing
your awsome talent, please keep em coming! mike

[Gandré]

sweet to bring coffee and universe into oneness.
loved it. very reflective! love....
lara

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

A very beautiful piece. Like puzzle piece that just fits together and makes a whole.

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Neat. ^^ This would make a really cool song. lol!

Love the imagery here! I smelled the coffee and saw the beautiful painting that was Mother Earth and Father Time. Ah, true love... :)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Michael X]

angi, felt i needed to come back and read your enlightening writing, your work alway has the ability to
set the readers heart adrift in the moment, this poem is written in essence to the form which is capturing as well as captivating, the meaning, speaks metaphorically on many levels and leaves the reader in a
pondering state of passsionate wonder, poetically enhanced, beautifully done, loved the images.

[Emily B]

This is lovely. Flowing and beautiful.

[Marvin Dennis]

Very nice rhythm and flow. Well done!

[Charlotte Marie]

Great job! This really brings out the meaning of love. Really tells the "2 peas in a pod" story! Thanks for sharing I hope to see more of you lovely work soon! Thanks again!~CM~

[angelina neves]

Thank you sooooooooooo much Mike, your reviews always makes me feel special!