Dissent

Two people sharing a moment.

Wings flutter against the pitch black night

Mysterious beasts swoop

Planting uncensored ideas in our souls

Hands reaching, unable to remain still

 

How did I test your lust?

 

Darkness covers us, veiling us to the world

Shattering silent whispers

Revealing to each other dark thoughts

Things never meant to be shared

 

Was I losing my mind?

 

Unhindered violence finds us on the ground

Steadfast chains grasp

Two hearts dissenting to give way

Begging to feel the roaring passion

 

Did you mean to hold me so tight?

 

Tantalizing breathes ignite the frigid air

Chocolate eye darken

Bracing my soul, teasing my heart

Intoxicated kisses levitate us from earth

 

Is this bred from your touch?

 

Heated whispers hiss into the night

Virile hands grope

Vexing my control, awakening my demons

Exploring with an illegal vigilance

 

Did you want this as I?

 

Tattered lies hover, daring us to give in

Undaunted passion takes over

Repossessing our thoughts, controlling our bodies

Forcing us to give in to its enthralling lust

 

Can this feeling last forever?

Reviews

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

my answer is, yes...but it's also absolutely a loaded question, so keep that in mind, because, *quarks

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

as well..well done

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

as well, my name is john

[Terri Abasseth]

This is something I'd read while listening to The Wall. When the first two stanzas had been all that I'd read it seemed must more abstract. A little more boundless. I had the idea that people phase out of existence in sleep and enter some new dreamverse, with wraiths, and bones and flowers made of unwinding bandages. It enabled me to create some weird acid trip with no substance influencing me save for the writing. I was a little disappointed when it all came together and became more tangible. I'll admit to some disappointment Kudos on the beginning though.

[Dream Weaver]

Passionate and searing heat.
The imagery compliments the
flow of this sensual lust laden
write..Well done...