PityA Story by aspiring-novelist-angelJust something that I really felt like writing, though I'm not sure what I'm going to turn it into yet... Just something very random at the momentI watched
him shiver as he was curled into a tight ball on the concrete floor. His arms
covered his face and he whimpered like a pathetic dog. I stared down at him, no
pity in my eyes and I demanded that he get up. He peeked out from under the
cover of his arms, stuttering with a shaky voice, “P-p-p-lease,” he begged,
“D-d-d-don’t hur-r-rt me-e-e!” “Save it.” I heard my
voice come out cool and icy. It was steady and emotionless and I surprised
myself that I was able to be this way. I scrutinized him carefully, deciding
whether or not I should spare him the torturing pain I was capable of
inflicting. I felt almost sorry for him, he had no idea what I could do to him,
and he was stupid enough to think I was harmless. Forgiveness. The thought
crossed my mind for a moment, but a brief moment so I barely recognised it. There was
no way I could forgive what he had done to me, the only answer screaming
through my mind was revenge. I held out my arm and extended one finger towards
him, and then I carefully flicked the finger forward, drawing energy as I did
so. The minute my finger moved he was flown across the room and he smashed into
the wall on the other side of the room; just as if I’d simply flicked a little
bug out of my way. My
breathing was becoming heavy; he was quite exhausting, putting up a lot of
resistance. I walked steadily towards his body which lay scrunched up next to
the wall. I aimed my hand at him once more and lifted it, lifting his body in
the process so that he was almost standing now. I stretched my fingers,
slamming him flat against the wall, paralysing him, subjecting him to my grasp.
He stared at me wide-eyed and terrified, panic burning like flames in his
irises. I tilted my head to the side, observing him. I readied my hand,
carefully planning to make a fist, knowing what it would do to his body in
return. My fingers twitched, anxious for the movement, the release of energy.
They contracted only a centimetre when a loud crash boomed behind me. I dropped
my hand and the man dropped to the floor like a rag doll. I spun round, arms
ready to face whatever enemy emerged. The dust began to settle and I saw that
whoever it was had left a large gap in the wall as his entrance. I looked
harder, trying to identify the silhouette in the shadows. “I never took
you as the violent type.” His words
hit me with full force and I stumbled backwards. It wasn’t possible. He
couldn’t be back, it just wasn’t possible. He emerged
slowly from the shadows, showing me his grinning face. “Did you miss me?” I screamed
and sprinted towards him, arms ready to attack him. He laughed.
“Surely you know by now that you can’t defeat me.” I leaped at
him, flying through the air, willing to kill him again if I had to. I watched
it happen in slow motion, and before I could reach him, he lifted his hand and
held his palm flat towards me. The world began to spin and I was crumpling to
the ground as everything faded into black. I’d failed. © 2010 aspiring-novelist-angel |
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Added on December 29, 2010 Last Updated on December 29, 2010 Authoraspiring-novelist-angelAboutI'm new to writing... though hopefully improving. It is quite difficult for a sixteen year old to write a book that will actually have sufficient knowledge of language and not to mention experience. .. more..Writing
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