Meet Again

Love takes over all humans

I saw you standing next to a bar

I saw you driving your car

I saw you on magazine covers

The thought of you

 

Makes me see lovers

 

My eyes widen

My mouth drops

My mind feels dreamy

I reach out a photo

 

A memory of you

 

A flash that left you in surprise

You didn't think I would hide

But I was desperate

To have you in my hands

 

As a picture at least

 

Every moment alone

I start dreaming of you

I feel so much excitement

Of sending you my number

 

I make you smile by calling you when I get home

 

If our eyes meet again

That's when I will have my chance

I want to meet you tomorrow

So don't be late

 

Or I'll be waiting for you to come at eight

 

At my home

We will share a bottle

I will cook for you

But please come

 

You can guess how much I need you

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Erin]

Your style and pattern are excellent. It has the style of a poem, the pattern of a song. Nice nice indeed. Tone of hopeful depression is probably the best thing about this poem. Great job.
PBP

[Richard Williams]

This is a good write that effectively expresses your eager anticipation. Line (9) would be better simply "I take out a photo".

[Eric Cox]

Very good write. The way you created this with the single lines is cool (best parts in poem, I think.), nice romantic feel to this poem of desiring someone, nice work.

[Ramiz Ilham Khan]

Sweet.

[Jenny Nelson]

Lovely, romantic piece. Great expression.

[Coyote Poetry]

Few times in a life. Things will fall right. Certain people will make us crazy. Timing and luck is needed to make sweet dreams come true. I like this poem. The meeting. Setting a date and hope. I like the ending to a very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[William Fields Issac]

The thought of love that could never be, I like it and the pattern it follows is terrific

[Arya_the_elven_lady]

I applaud you! An excellent example of romantic poetry.

[Ruth]

Such vivid yearning, it blisters the soul! Awesome love!
Anticipation, the wanting, the passion!
Great wording and poem hon
xx

[Tomi]

I wish I was the one being expected!