Fall Day In The Park

What could be better than spending a Fall day in the park

Reviews

[angelina neves]

wonderful feeling of enjoying the simple pleasures of life, as we should always try to do! Beautiful as always!

[J.Black]

Wonderful!
although I still am I kid, it made me realize all the small things that I will soon look back on.
This is truly the best season of the year!
Keep up the excellent work,
hope to review more from you!
x

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Just beautiful, this made me remember piling in the leaves as a kid with my siblings, just to rake them up again. Simple pleasures in simple fun.

[Sharon Miller Bolander]

Sometimes we just have to stop and smell the seasons! Whatever work we thought was important may pale by comparison. This is really a lovely look at the splendor of autumn, Liz! Sharon

[emmajoy]

What a bright, happy, wonderful combination of illustration and words!

Your fourth stanza sums up in such a playful, skillful manner.

Thank you for sharing a reminder of how beautiful Autumn is (not that anyone needs to be reminded!)

[Tony Hwilka]

Oh! How you poem takes me back through the pages of time to childhood. Thank you for the memories.

Tony

[Jason Henry]

beautiful piece...i read it through once, then i re-read it as pooh would to piglet, then i re-re-read it as piglet would to pooh, then i re-re-re-read it as tigger just for fun haha! a delightful piece...stanza two was my absolute favourite! flow, imagery, technique were abounding like crazy and played off each other perfectly...thanks for writing and sharing this piece!

[Spoken]

I do love how autumn seems to bring out the nistalgia of childhood memories.. who doesn't remember playing in leaf piles? Good times..

thanks for the the wonderful feelings. You've done autumn justice in your description of it's beauty.