I truly NEEDED to read this right now. You can't possibly (or maybe you can) understand what I am saying. This is a great write and brings up many good points. It is well written, I like the form and the flow and more than anything the meaning. Thank you new friend for comming along on this particular day. How "strange" that seems to me but maybe that is why you are here now. Good write, great read and much appreciated. Good work. ;)
If everyone in the world could read this beautiful piece, maybe our world would be in a happier and better state.
Your thoughts and feelings positively flow from the 'page' and are set very finely.
Thank you for sharing.
"I learned to love, and forgive and forget
I'm learning still and yet.."
I love the message you're sharing..!
Forgiveness is sometimes difficult,
but I believe is the key to inner peace,
freedom..
Holding on to hate, anger...
can only destroy one's self..
and others.
And why would we do that?
I'm still learning this...
and other
ongoing lessons.. :)
OH, this is wonderful. I love the stanza that starts with Time Marches. Just a delight. Thank you so much for sharing. The music and the picture go well, too.
We'll never learn it all, but we sure have to keep giving it a go. :)
I truly NEEDED to read this right now. You can't possibly (or maybe you can) understand what I am saying. This is a great write and brings up many good points. It is well written, I like the form and the flow and more than anything the meaning. Thank you new friend for comming along on this particular day. How "strange" that seems to me but maybe that is why you are here now. Good write, great read and much appreciated. Good work. ;)
Liz, this is s beautiful. Life has always been a challenge for me. And, I guess it always will be. There were so many things that I've had to learn. Alot of things I had to learn on my own. I don't think we ever get to the point, where we know it all. There will always be things for us to learn.
thats what builds charachter sis. SOrry Im a bit truant in getting around to this work of art. But I did. THank you for the kind words heart spoken here at WC, Your Brother Lewis
A tissue alert here dear Sis. Truly it brought tears to my eyes it
was such an endearing poem. Well done again! Thank you for
submitting yet another beauty to my challenge this week and
for "Keeping the Dream Alive"
Albert's Poetry Cafe
http://www.writerscafe.org/groups/Albert%27s-Poetry-Cafe-%28correct-link%29/2736/
Albert's Poetry Cafe ~ 'BE MY VALENTINE!" (Keeping the Dream Alive!) with Helena February 1.. more..