Shadows
A Story by
angelinmypocket
A fantasy that's not really a fantasy
© 2008 angelinmypocket
Reviews
A little "cheesy" for my taste.
what with the graphics and bad html music.
However, the poem did warm my heart ;)
even If I hold no such faith
Posted 16 Years Ago
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Fantastic!!
Oh I love this,
perhaps because it's how I think! lol
hmm... Liz...
sooo, who sent you? lol j/k
"Do you exist only for me,
or do others know you too?"..
Wow! You have truly
tapped into my mind here!
"I catch a glimpse of movement from the
corner of my eye, and I know you exist,
but when I turn to face you, you are
never there.."
Yes.. I really get this. More than I
can express.
A truly awesome piece. Thank you.
(and there's that color blue again.. wow, I love it!)
Posted 16 Years Ago
Fantastic!!
Oh I love this,
perhaps because it's how I think! lol
hmm... Liz...
sooo, who sent you? lol j/k
"Do you exist only for me,
or do others know you too?"..
Wow! You have truly
tapped into my mind here!
"I catch a glimpse of movement from the
corner of my eye, and I know you exist,
but when I turn to face you, you are
never there.."
Yes.. I really get this. More than I
can express.
A truly awesome piece. Thank you.
(and there's that color blue again.. wow, I love it!)
Liz...There hs been times, when I felt as if there was someone else there with me. It is an eerie feeling, but at the same time a comforting one, too. I truly enjoy reading your poems. It seems as like I can relate to most of them. Whether they are true or not. Thank you for sharing them with me.
Love...Sue/Sis
Posted 16 Years Ago
Liz...There hs been times, when I felt as if there was someone else there with me. It is an eerie feeling, but at the same time a comforting one, too. I truly enjoy reading your poems. It seems as like I can relate to most of them. Whether they are true or not. Thank you for sharing them with me.
Love...Sue/Sis
A wonderful poem sis,hugs m.m
Posted 16 Years Ago
A wonderful poem sis,hugs m.m
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angelinmypocket Whitewright, TX
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