Ahhhh, so, so, beautiful my dear friend. This moved me so much, I have tears in my eyes.
What a wise and lovely women you are to write such insightful poetry.
Could not fault this, you incorporated the phrase beautifully, and as always your artistic
talent showed though so wonderfully, a sheer joy to read and behold!
wow! Your writing is excellent. It just flows naturally, peacefully with a very touching note. You are very talented and to read your poem was such a delight. Your write fits the contest gracefully :)
Ahhhh, so, so, beautiful my dear friend. This moved me so much, I have tears in my eyes.
What a wise and lovely women you are to write such insightful poetry.
Could not fault this, you incorporated the phrase beautifully, and as always your artistic
talent showed though so wonderfully, a sheer joy to read and behold!
Thank you for joining the challenge with this beautiful poem of remembrance. There's something very soothing about recalling my own father's words, and I could not help but relate to yours. You fit the challenge phrase inside your lines seamlessly! :-) Sharon
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