everybody should read this blissfully touching story
of Christmas hope, heart, joy you've captured a truly
beautiful sense of what the real meaning of angel on
earth is, as the gentle beginning immediately takes the
reader to another place and time, felt like I was coming
home, welcomed with warm greeeting, the beautiful
words float into the meaning, compassion, loved this, mike
everybody should read this blissfully touching story
of Christmas hope, heart, joy you've captured a truly
beautiful sense of what the real meaning of angel on
earth is, as the gentle beginning immediately takes the
reader to another place and time, felt like I was coming
home, welcomed with warm greeeting, the beautiful
words float into the meaning, compassion, loved this, mike
aww.. this was truly beautiful. thank you for sharing. I too have tried over the years to grasp that special feeling on christmas I felt as a child and it always seems to escape me. I have a 'weakness', if you will, to buy for everyone else but me, because it warms my heart. I know the joy recieving a special gift can bring. Your words are pure and true. lovely..
Very interesrting and unique story. You mad a very good choice of words and it was descripted excelently. It sounded like it was coming straight out of a children's book or a motivational article.
One question though:
You wrote;
"I know she sat up there and smiled at me every time I looked at her."
Who is the 'I' in the story that you are reffering to?
Liz, this was such a touching story. Simply beautiful dynamics in this piece. A great Christmas message that left me with a such a warm and loving feeling. Great write.
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